Poem Needing Feedback 2

This is the type of poem that definitely needs feedback, even though most of it would probably not be positive.  It's ok though!  I'm open to any criticism, as you would most likely be if you are visiting this.


(What Love Sounds Like)
by Matt Catania

shhhhhhhhhhhhhSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHshhhhhhhhhhh!!!

huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe? huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe? huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe? huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?huhe?

WEEEEE!!!EEEEEEooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo…

(who)-(who)-(who)-(who)-(who)-(who)-(who)-(who)-(who)-(who)-(who)-(who)-(who)-(who)-(who)-(who)-

(haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh.)

whhhsssssssSSSSHHHHHH!!!  <HUH>  __  <HUUUH> __  <HUH!>

huhHE?!   huhHE!  .  .  .  .  .                                                                  huh…he?

            huhHE.  huhHe.

AAAAAAaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh………….

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Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…

Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…