Friday, February 4, 2011

Poem Needing Feedback

I need someone to read these poems to tell me what they think of them, because I am not sure.


Paper Sound
by Matt Catania


I scream in my writing!
Paper never makes a sound.

My voice is so soothing
when no one is around.

Dynamic, abrasive scratches:
my power frightens -
trembles goes the ground.

Paper never makes a sound.

Cold and callous impressions
never yield to the pen and heart abound.

Paper never makes a sound.

Restless savage burning
found fast fastened and striking to be found.

Paper never makes a sound.

My call is a comet!
Caught streaking across these skies -
that screams dynamic and savage -
with restless power of heart -
from a soothing voice -
that no one is around.




Paper never makes a sound.
 

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